“I Ain’t Messin”

Warning: A LOT of profanity and violence in this monologue. ๐Ÿ˜€





“I Ain’t Messin”

“Yeah, take your fucking time bitch, I’m still gonna be here, I ain’t going nowhere. Fucking whore checking out my man; I see her do it all the time: Swaggering that arse of hers, tits bursting out her tops, gettin ’em out for my boys. Well, she messed with the wrong bitch this time. I’m gonna plummer her face in the ground ’til she’s got no fucking face left. This little slut has gone way too far this time and now, her numbers up. My man is ‘Mine’, she’ll won’t be swigging out of any ones beer in a hurry when I knock the bitch’s teeth out. Fuck man, I’ll sit here all night waiting for her and the bitch knows it. She got 5 minutes before I go in there and pull the damn whore out by her hair. She’s messed with the wrong chick this time. And she’s gonna know I’m the fucking ‘queen bitch’ round here”

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I am so sorry, but I did warn you! ๐Ÿ˜€

Prompt: VisDare 59: Moxie by Angela Goff

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9 thoughts on ““I Ain’t Messin”

  1. I heard my middle sister going on like this on one occasion when she was very drunk, with the wrong guy, and not nearly as happy as she is now. I talked her down. No sense going to jail over a couple of jerks who deserve each other.


    1. The fuel of alcohol! Exactly, there is no point going to jail over something like this. But our lass in the story is one of those dangerous girls that the girl on the receiving end would be too scared to tell the cops. Well, good job you calmed your sis down and nice to know she’s happy with another fella.

      Thanks for commenting and even following, I appreciate it very much though not every story’s like this one (just to let you know in case you didn’t get a chance to read any of the others) some are lighter and others pure sick – I like to have fun with writing!! ๐Ÿ˜€

      I like your blog URL – ‘God Made Adam and Steve’. Only this morning I got a bit mad about the inequality of such things, and it’s all down to the bloody church. Really annoys me. Good on you to put that out there ๐Ÿ™‚


    1. It’s the steely look in her eyes along with her calm disposition that makes this girl means what she is thinking in her mind. If she was shouting her mouth off to everyone that this is what she is planning, then it would be all talk. But because she is keeping it to herself along with the look on her face and her way too relaxed demeanor; that is what makes her dangerous and mean every word. It’s the silent ones you have to watch!

      Thanks for commenting ๐Ÿ™‚


        1. Hi, sorry for the late reply. I’ve been having massive ‘writers self-doubt’ all because I got the most pleasant feedback critique going but it made me really question myself (though the advice was sound).

          Back to the pic. I just saw it in her when I looked at her demeanour and those eyes and even clenched facial muscles I saw and decided she was quietly ready to kick some arse. It was a good picture to write about as is every single one you challenge us to!! ๐Ÿ˜‰


    1. Hi, sorry for the late reply… I just saw her as someone who’s blood was boiling yet calm at the same time, both for creating a deadly cocktail. If you’re drawn to her… maybe she’s the kind of woman you might be looking for!! But could you handle her!??…..


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